Poem using the Six Room

Last week we learnt about the six rooms poem strategy. They  are six different steps to help you make a poem.

The first room is Image/Photograph, you picture a picture not thinking of a poem and write it down. The second room is Light, you picture the how much light there is and colours there in your picture and write it down. The third room is Sound, you think of all the sounds that are happening in you picture and write them down.

The forth room is questions like. What do you want to know more about. The fifth room is. What are your feelings? Write down what your feeling in a few words. The sixth room is look over your previous rooms and ideas and choose a word, a line or phrase that feels important and repeat 3 times.

Tall gum tree

ssssssssssssss On hill

ssssssssssssssssssssss  Sunset

Yellow, orange and red

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa  In painting

ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss Calmness

yet confused

sssssssssssss  Colours

ssssssssssssssssssssss of birds

and animals

ssssssssssss extravagant

ssssssssssssssssssssssss distant


ssssssss magical

ssssssssssssssss magical