Monnee Ponds vs St. Monicas

The game was about to start and nobody knew who was going to win. The stakes where high because if we lost we would drop 3 points and lose a spot. The game kicked off and the opposition was on the ball and were attacking and nothing came of it and they where stoped. We started our first attack and trying to make something of it but nothing happened and the opposition was back on the ball. “Stop them, don’t let them through on goal”, I yelled. The ball was stoped and booted up field and the rest of the half was pretty dead.

The ball went back and forth and no one had a clear chance really. There where some good attacks but none of them where dangerous enough to be a goal. The half dragged on until the ref finally blew the whistle for half time. The half had ended and the second was near. “We have to retain possession and work our way into the box and since there’s no offside we need to take opportunity of that and use it to our favour not there’s”, firmly said the coach, ” good luck lads and lets get a win”.

The second half was in the first few minutes and we started to dominate the possession quite well and within minutes we scored our first goal. The second felt like is was about happen and then I realised I was on the ball and in front of goal. I had a shot and it went in and it was my first goal of the season and hopefully not my last. The half went on and we scored two more goals controlling the possession and dominating and we were going to dominate it all the way to the finish.

We did and came out with an outstanding victory and great spirits. We were went away and celebrated.


The Last Battle

The Rebel Flagship was approaching fast. My adrenaline was rushing and the crew where nervous, the weapons where on standby. The flagship felt like every centimetre it passed by it got faster and faster. There lasers fired at us missing just.

That meant the battle had began and we had to man the stations. The stations where maned in seconds and we started our offensive. Our lasers fired and the hit three of there laser cannons destroying all of them. Next we aimed for there missiles because if they fired they would certainly take us out. We fired our lasers hoping they would hit before the missiles fired and they just did. The rebel ship started to turn around and was trying to escape.

The rebel flagship was gaining ground fast and was going to escape. We fired shots at there main engine and only one of them hit. At the start the explosions where small, but in seconds they got bigger and bigger. The back end suddenly exploded in huge ball of flames that left them sitting ducks. We fired everything we ad trying to finish them off a quick as possible. The exploded in the biggest explosion I’ve ever seen.

The flagship had been destroyed and now I felt great pride in what I had done. As it the explosion finished parts of the ship flew past just missing the ship. There was also a great feel for celebration. It was a rush of excitement and happiness and freedom to the galaxy. Now it was time to head back to back and party.


When I was writing I used Intense Action to tie the beginning to the end. I also used the paragraph sandwich to organise my sentences so they would go in an order. The paragraph sandwich was very helpful and made my story interesting.

Soccer Ball Hail

“What ya doing Bobby”, said Alkanserationaler.

“Not much ya dosh”, said Bobby.

Then suddenly Freddy came parachuting out of nowhere and landed on top of Bobby making him go tumbling to the ground.

“What was that for”.

“I’m crazy”.

“OK guys where not here to fight where here to talk about…”

“You forgot what to talk about”, yelled Bobby.

“I’m pooing my pants”.

Alkanserationaler  and Bobby start at him thinking what he had done to himself since the last time they met. Last time they met he was fit speaking about things that where appropriate but now he locked messed up. In fact Freddy was going crazy because he was taking bad stuff.

“Have you being taking bad stuff Fred”, said Alkanserationaler in confusion.

“Yes evil clown”.

“What the”!!!

The suddenly out of nowhere.

“Hail the size of soccer balls are raining down on the city and destroying everything and everyone in it’s path”, yelled a terrified men.

Splat!!!, “that dude just got destroyed”. said Bobby.

“Dudes lets escape to the other side of the wall and be safe”.

They ran hard and fast and were getting closer. At the same time the storm was gaining on the. Time was running every second. The closer they got the more hopeful they got. So they got closer and closer and closer.

Freddy suddenly snapped out of craze.

“Where getting closer”, yelled Alkanserationaler over the hail.

“Jaffa Cakes”, said Fred.

“Well your not having any” yelled Bobby.

They where almost there and hopes where high. Yet it wasn’t over yet because they still had to pass security.

“Let us go through guards and we will not need to fight you”, yelled Bobby.

“Go through and be safe because were dumb and drunk and don’t care.”

Clatter Clatter Clatter Clatter!

“Machine guns!”

“Wait it’s the Americans there here to save us, run to the other side”.

“Your safe now guys you can go and become citizens of West Germany”.

“Yay we made it”, they all yelled in excitement.

The End.


An army of perfectly disguised balloons taking off from a secret base in western Berlin. With one target: London, UK the capital of England and British Commonwealth former British Empire. The army was commanded by Adolf Hitler Jr the person who tried to take over his own country with a single super tank. Except it was blown up by a nuke bomb and he survived because it was remote controlled.

At 12 hours Berlin time the balloons would take off for London. The target was clear. Destroy all the city and kill millions of people to gain control of the country. But they didn’t know that M.I.6 had sent 22 year old superspy Brian Lot to investigate and assassinate Hitler Jr. But what he didn’t know was he had been tricked by Hitler’s army with a smart trick. He had be tricked into miscalculating how many guards there where. And when he tried to charge in with a small S.A.S squad the where surprised by 500 guards which massacred  them and only half made it out alive including Brian.

“Those blasted Germans they tricked us into taking a small battalion of men head on”, said Brian running away from where they had tried to attack 500 men head on.

“Ah my leg, it fells like it wants to fall off”, screamed the man in extreme agony.

“We have to get him back to base before he dies from a lack of blood”, said he commander of the squad.

As they drove back to base the men weren’t about to stop using the F word talking about the Nazis.

“Are we there yet”, yelled the man in agony.

“No we aren’t and if you don’t stop we will seriously will tape your mouth shut”, firmly said Brian.

“Are we…

” I told you to stop and you didn’t so you got it”.

They got there an hour later in a stolen enemy jeep. And they then reported back what they found and the casualties of the men who had been killed.

“Why is that mans mouth taped shut”?, Asked the man that was debriefing the men.

“He wouldn’t stop saying “Are we there yet”!, said Brian with a sigh.”

“Ok that’s fine, at least you didn’t come in extremely annoyed”.

Brian had gathered enough information for the army to put on a full force attack in the enemies base. But in was to late the Balloons had already taken off for there target. The could sent in the R.A.F (Royal Air Force) but they would a big problem identifying them because even the weapons where so well disguised. Which meant the Balloons would have to reach London before the Air Force was sent in.

The Balloons hit the outer skirts of London and they where identified instantly because where by such a large of them (meaning at least 10 000). The Air Force was sent in, in squadrons of 20 each and there where 20 of them and they wiped of the treat by mowing them down like flies. But the mission wasn’t over yet because the base still existed and the base was now anti-air defended.

So England ordered a meeting between all of Europe to unite and fight the fret of the so called new German Empire. They all united (besides Russia) and then started to arm the forces and started to plan a big attack that would crush the empire for good, but the thing was the Germans where now stronger with the control of Germany at there hands and a bigger army to wield. But that was nothing compared to the Euro Allies and possibly any other country that was offering help to the Allies.

They wouldn’t stand a chance against such a large force even if Hitler had a cloning machine which he did but it still wouldn’t work. So he did what a person with a small army would do, clone there best solider 10 000 times  so he would defend the base with the best shot and all that stuff. And he did that to every other man that was good so he some what of an army of men but still not as big as The Euro Allies.

The battle for the fortified base began the next day with a allied bombing of the base which damaged the base extensively and half the cannons where destroyed and in the break of daylight the special forces of all countries started there advance on the base to take out any machine gun posts and take out the 88mm guns stationed on top of the base while the armoured divisions  went in on the side where there was little treat but RPGS and rocket launchers. while all the rest where getting ready for a slow advance/tactical advance into the base to destroy it.

At the end of the battle over 500 000 thousand Germans died and 2000 allied troops where killed or wounded. Hitler Jr escaped and went into hiding and was never seen again. Well for now he wasn’t going to be spotted at any time because they suspected he was hiding in Berlin. At the moment everyone was celebrating the win and had no intention of finding any bad guy soon. Brian was awarded a medal for his bravery in the base taking out the cloning machine single handily. He also took out 20 men to get to there with no weapon and no nothing but hands.

The following day Hitler Jr was captured and then tortured to deaf very slowly so he could pay for what he had done and that was the end.