Line Breaks:
The Shiny
Mongoose
is
Excited
Because
A lovely Raymond
Next to
Bryce quickly skipping above
Playground
Six Room:
Home
Home is no more
Home blown out
of the ground
Darkness
Home is no more
Home is gone
Home is dead
Last week we learnt about the six rooms poem strategy. They are six different steps to help you make a poem.
The first room is Image/Photograph, you picture a picture not thinking of a poem and write it down. The second room is Light, you picture the how much light there is and colours there in your picture and write it down. The third room is Sound, you think of all the sounds that are happening in you picture and write them down.
The forth room is questions like. What do you want to know more about. The fifth room is. What are your feelings? Write down what your feeling in a few words. The sixth room is look over your previous rooms and ideas and choose a word, a line or phrase that feels important and repeat 3 times.
Tall gum tree
ssssssssssssss On hill
ssssssssssssssssssssss Sunset
Yellow, orange and red
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa In painting
ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss Calmness
yet confused
sssssssssssss Colours
ssssssssssssssssssssss of birds
and animals
ssssssssssss extravagant
ssssssssssssssssssssssss distant
magical
ssssssss magical
ssssssssssssssss magical